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Keira Marcos
Harry Potter and the Soulmate Bond, All the World, Birth of the Serpent King and much more
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AMA contains spoilers to Keira Marcos works.
Hey! I've been writing for 34 years, worked professionally as a writer for two decades before semi-retiring due to stress (I don't share my pro names). I have 1.4 million words of published HP fan fiction and another 2 million in works in progress (I know that's insane). I ship Harry/Hermione, Harry/Draco, Harry/Hermione/Draco, and James/Lily. I have a cast of OCs that I've created and embedded into my HP headcanon that you will see across the body of my work. My favorite HP fic that I've written is certainly "Courting Hermione Granger" and my favorite two HP fics of all time are Sunset Over Britain by Bobmin & Turn by Saras_Girl. I'm looking forward to chatting with you guys today!
Keira Marcos
Hey Keira! What is your headcanon regarding the DOM as far as who they answer to (the Queen or the Ministry) and also what that department covers?
It greatly depends on what the DOM to do and how it impacts my plot. In Harry Potter & the Soulmate Bond it served my purposes/plot if the DOM was part of the ministry because of my favorite protags is Tobias Savage -- it was a good place to use him.

I do prefer that the body answer to the Queen -- and be part of the Her Secret Service so to speak.
Do you have a particularly favorite character or ship to write? What makes them do? Is it just the easy ability to get into their headspace because you seem to understand him/her better than others?
I favor writing from Harry's POV -- that could be a bleed off from the books, honestly. I identify closely with Hermione since I was bullied as a child and I connected with her deeply in the first book.

I don't have a problem getting into any character's headspace because I build character profiles (even for canon characters) but I do find Luna difficult to write-- I don't think i hit her mystical edge well.
I was wondering if you continually tweak the profiles for your original characters, or if once you have them as you want them to be you leave them alone for the most part.
Original Characters fill gaps in the HP canon for me so I like to move them around a bit in various works. While I often keep their basic background the same -- sometimes you'll see them in different professions or in places that might surprise you because I see no need to not to use that work i've already done.

Also, an alternate universe means that all of my characters are impacted--not just the canon ones. So if I set Harry Potter down in a world where Sentinels & Guides are known than I can anticipate that every single character in that 'verse will be slightly different and might have chosen a different path due to that fundamental change in the world building.
What are your thoughts on Neville?
I wish Neville had been more present in the books. There's this thread of potential (due to the prophecy) that never gets pulled in the series. We see glimpses of it throughout but it's never been enough. I honestly wish he'd been the 3rd in the Golden Trinity to so speak. I think he would've been a more interesting character than Ron and Ron might have been better served in the role that Neville filled in the last book.

It would've allowed Ron to come into his own.
Since Armand Deering (my fave of your OCs) is an unrepentant asshole would you ever write him as a Headmaster replacing Dumbles?
LOL. No. I mean, wow. He'd be awful at it.
Do you have a favorite fix-it point to start an AU from or are you sparked from different points in the books/movies?
I'd like to fix it so Sirius Black doesn't die -- so I can do that at various points in canon. I just think Harry's lost enough by the 5th book and shouldn't have to suffer that loss.
Would there be another fandom you'd consider plonking Harry (and or Hermione/Draco) into?
It would have to be a fantasy fandom because I don't like crossing the streams. Maybe one of my own making. I have a little idea tumbling around in my head about a steam punk world that Hermione gets thrown in (the first chapter is written).

The Hobbit/LOTR was a very natural merger --- I can't see it being that easy with any other fandom.
Do you look back on some of your previous work and ever wish you could have done something differently or pushed your characters in a different direction or do you simply allow them to write themselves and see where the narrative takes off to?
I zero draft and plot all the events. I decide the goals, motivations, and conflicts (GMC) of my characters before I start writing so my characters do nothing without my explicit permission (cause I've got control issues like whoa).

There have been times when my work has inspired me to sort of write fan fic of my own stuff but that hasn't happened in HP much.
You have frequently mentioned tossing Potter canon out the window if it doesn't fit your plot. Is there something of canon beside magic that you want to keep in every story?
I'm thinking about it -- and I can't think if of anything I would toss right out the window (except magic of course) if it didn't suit my purposes. I don't get bogged down in canon.
If you could have someone other than Sirius raise Harry in the magical world, (Dumbles is right out) Who would you pick?
Amelia Bones, Minerva McGonagall -- Of my ocs: Armand Deering or Louis Bertrand I'd never have Hiro do it cause he hates kids.
How do you decide who the main house elf is going to in you stories. Whether it will be Star or Dobby and Winky?
The role of Star in HP & the Soulmate Bond was done for a world building purpose regarding the rights of house elves and the history of house elf houses beyond the magical canon. I needed a house elf that wasn't bogged down in events in the books -- a clean slate of a sorts.

I often pick Dobby out of nostalgia and Winky for the same reason when it's reasonable within my plot do to do so. Star's my favorite though.
In any given situation, would you prefer to use a canon character to fill a role, or an OC?
Canon is always best -- less reader confusion BUT there are some circumstances where there is no canon character to fill a spot (due to Harry's epic lack of curiosity) and an OC is the only option.

I can't put a canon character as the owner of Flourish & Blotts - we never met them, etc.
Does it ever surprise you how much love a minor OC can get?
Not any more, but Stargate kind of broke me of that surprise when I accidently created a character that my fans love more than me.

I work hard to create characters -- with profiles, and the like so i hope they connect with a reader. I know how an OC sounds, speaks, smells, and even moves through a scene -- I want my readers to feel that with me.
What is your rage level at Umbridge?
I'd be happy if Voldemort went to prison for life.

Umbridge needed to be thrown through the Veil.
Favorite plot twist in the stuff you've posted online so far?
The Lux Ordinis in Darkly Loyal.
Do you have a particularly favorite trope, or one you see yourself writing more?
I love love love time travel. It's my favorite though I'm super enamored with the concept I explored in All the World where Arda and Earth are basically sister dimensions and are sort of connected.
You delved in deep with the Deverger in All The World, and we learned about House Elves in Soulmate Bond. Is there any other canon beings you would like to explore.
I have a project where Harry's father is actually a High Elf -- and they live in a pocket dimension due to mistreatment by other magicals -- they basically told the magical world to kiss their ass.

I'd love to go back to that eventually and really delve into that world and what it would mean to Harry to be half-human and half-High Elf.
What is your favorite scene that you've written in HP?
Ha. The sex scene with Harry and Hermione in HP & the Soulmate bond with the elemental fire that breaks the wards in his house. The aftermath is glorious.
If you could yeet one character out of the books, (other than dumbles cause duh) who?
I mean -- the role of Ginny Weasley in book 2 could've been taken on by a character that was already introduced.

I felt like we didn't get the full monty on that front actually -- the seventh child and the first daughter born in generations and .... all we get is she marries Harry Potter?? That's it?
Which canon character would you consider your favorite of all? Least favorite?
Favorite - Hermione Granger
Least - Umbridge
What part of the series can you just not wrap your head around? Like just nope. I'm out.
The murders of Sirius Black & Hedwig -- frankly it looked like author sadism.

With Sirius -- no support for Harry.

Hedwig -- she didn't want to deal with the owl on the Horcrux Hunt so she killed the poor thing and told us that it symbolized the death of Harry's childhood and I'm like, sorry, Joanne, pretty sure Pettigrew murdered Harry's childhood when he killed Cedric in front of him.
What do you think of the theory that Dumbles was mindwiping, or mindcontrolling a LOT of his people? Like with the time discrepancy between sirius, hagrid, the motorcycle and all the timing stuff?
It's not really supported by canon -- it's a fun plot hole to play with (and I have) but his canon actions are enough to make him a villain.
Thanks for doing the AMA. You spent a whole podcast speaking of how to fics the GoF, so have you thought about writing something in it?
I have a project called Phoenix that isn't online and isn't finished that is set during the GoF -- it's my least my favorite place to write in canon. I just find the tasks tedious and I don't want to invent my own.
You have a variety of inventive ways of killing characters (Hello snatcher deaths in The Hidden War!) What one is your favourite?
Winky & the Nundu preserve in Darkly Loyal.
I love that you give Harry familiars (Hedwig or others) but all the animals and really well rounded, Do you create character profiles and research the species before writing them?
Yes-- especially when it comes to the snakes since they speak to Harry. I have an idea about having the Fates (the runespoor from Soulmate Bond) bond to Harry when he's little on Privet Drive (lol) so when he arrives at Hogwarts he's like -- he just comes swinging out of that parselmouth closet.
Since you have incepted yourself regarding the Dverger, how do you see that impacting sequels to previous posted fics (War Mages & HP & Soulmate)?
I'm eventually going to go through all of my HP work and edit the G word out of it in some fashion or another.
What is your take on Lupin?
He has untreated clinical depression and was never taught a single coping mechanism to deal with that or his cursed condition.
Are there any rules you would want people to follow if they borrow the concept of your Dverger? (Because you have incepted a lot of us!)
Nah, I don't do that. But I have a page on my site dedicated to permissions if you have questions about that: https://keiramarcos.com/permissions/
If Harry, Hermione, and/or Zir-forbid Draco, had to lay low in the Muggle world for a long period of time (ala Sirius being on the run in book 3/4), what job would you give them?
Therein lies the problem -- they have zero skills for the Muggle world once they leave Hogwarts so Hermione would probably be the best situated and Draco the worst. They'd end up in low wage, thankless jobs due to lack of A Levels or any other Muggle academic records unless they could fake them and I'm unsure if they could.

They'd have to resort to some pretty ugly magic to get ahead and I wouldn't do that.

Draco is gonna end up serving coffee in a cafe and being a real bitch about it.
Which electives do you think Harry should have chosen in third year?
I'd have done Runes & Arithmancy for my own curiosity. Or maybe Magical Theory would be cool.
Is it easy for you to slip back into an older series if you get back to writing in it? e.g. War Mages Trilogy
Well, yes, because I already have the outlines of those works done. It boils down to interest versus ease of writing.
What is your favourite thing/topic to world-build on?
Ritual magic -- the structure, the ramifications, the way it ripples out magically depending on what's being done. One of my favorite rituals to create was the one where Harry gave parselmagic to Hermione in Stand by You.
Of all the various magical transport methods how do you chose which to use?
I'd like to apparate. Portkeys look scary and I hate to get dirty so no floo for this girl. Maybe a magic carpet would be cool but we never see those in canon.
I’m late to the convo and you might already answered this. If so ignore. You write epic courtroom scenes. Which one was your favorite?
I'm fond of all the court scenes in Courting Hermione Granger -- I think Hermione shines in those scenes.
I was really fascinated by the concept of parselmagic. Was there anything in particular that spurred this idea?
The snakes on the the caduceus.

I have this idea that parselmagic was the foundation for all healing magic and it spread out into the muggle world thus the symbol.
What do you make of them ignoring the Chamber of Secrets in the books till the final battle?
Honestly? I think the author basically forgot about it until she needed to add some drama to the final book.

The fact that Harry never considered using it to hide from Umbridge is straight up appalling. I MEAN. Honestly, this boy had a secret hide out that only he could get into -- and he never went back???
If you could resort one HP character, who would it be?
I'd put Hermione in Hufflepuff because she's loyal.
Piggy-backing off of this, if you could do the same--resorting other characters--which characters would change houses, and to what?
Neville would stay in Gryffindor
Harry would go to Slytherin
I'd leave Ron where he is -- sigh
Ginny would go to Slytherin (And so would Percy)
I'd put the twins in Hufflepuff because they are first and foremost loyal to each other.

Luna would go to Gryffindor because while she's smart she's also brave enough to be exactly who she is no matter the consequences.

hot take: i think the sorting is low-key abusive.
I agree with the house sorting. What would you do instead of sorting them by houses?
I'd house them by year until after Owls then house them by discipline in a more of an pseudo apprentice situation.
Out of Harry's year group who do you think should have been made prefects?
Neville should've gotten it over Ron and while I agree Hermione was responsible for it -- I don't know if it served her. So probably Fay Dunbar (which is certainly based more on my headcanon than actual canon except to say that Lavender would've been as bad as Ron).
Lucius's redemption in Birth of the Serpent King is probably one of the best Lucius redemptions we've seen. Where did this idea come from? To make Lucius the character that causes all this change?
Thanks! I wrote that fic shortly after I broke my foot and I was playing around with ways to make Lucius atone for what he'd done in the past and to make it a point of family honor for him.

It had to come in a moment when he had no choice but to act -- to do for Lily Potter what she'd done for his own wife. So that meant the cemetery.

It's clearly an AU so it was my assumption going into that he didn't almost use the AK on Harry after the events of the chamber and that he'd been avoiding Harry Potter as much as he could since the kid had entered the magical world.
Your thoughts on Harry rejecting Draco's hand of friendship?
I think it's a pivotal moment for them (and made more so in the movies since he did it in front of many). In the books, it happens on the train with just their personal friends as witnesses (which is bad enough).

It's a moment of genuine disdain between them so it's hard and you can work your way through it in fic in a variety of ways.
Do you think the deathly Hallows were under utilised in canon?
Yes. I mean -- why have both? It seemed a complete waste of lore and world building to give us the whole master of death theme then throw the pseudo horcrux at harry as the reason he survived.

Why wasn't the Deathly Hallows the thing Voldemort knew not?

It's a very deeply unsatisfying situation.
In Harry Potter & the Soulmate bond, I love how well you wove everything together from Hermione's animagus form to all of the adorable familiars and I really enjoy how you pace all of your works. What is your writing process to make sure everything comes together so well?
I zero draft -- the plot document is a mixture of plot points/events, characterization, GMC, and ripple management.

The plot for HP & the Soulmate Bond series 1 was 36k.

It's a big project so I had to make sure i was pulling all the threads throughout the whole series.

So Soulmate Bond was a rewrite -- I had to take it apart, plot, and draft the zero draft so I spent 2 months doing that before i wrote the first part.
Was there a particular song or songs you played while writing to help you?
I do write to music but my playlist for writing is varied these days unless I'm writing Stargate then it's Josh Groban all the way.

I think the song Gravity by Sara Bareilles speaks to me when it comes to Hermione and her journey in the magical world.
Having redeemed Lucius in Birth of the Serpent King, is there another character you would like to redeem? Is there anyone who you cannot see any way of redeeming?
I can see cutting Pettigrew and Snape off at the pass -- before they ever get a chance to be Death Eaters. But neither are genuinely redeemable after the death of Lily Potter -- they can certainly atone but it will never be enough for what they did.

I couldn't redeem Umbridge -- she's too much like a real life monster.
You put up a cast of characters with pictures for most of your stories. How important is the visual aide for you?
No, I don't need it at all but my readers like it so I do it for them.
Armand is a complete badass so what was he doing during the first war that kept him from mopping the floor with Tommy-boy?
It depends on the AU but most of the time Armand Deering is living France and doesn't give a fuck what's happening in Britain unless someone gets in his business.

You'll see him in part 3 of Heart & Soul in November on RT -- working in Britain as Unspeakable.
Would you consider writing an Armand raise Harry fic or not?
I would yes -- but I'd probably start it much the same way I did HP & Soulmate Bond -- when harry is older or maybe even an adult.

It would be fun to bring him back to Britain as a grown ass man raised by Armand because Dumbledore can't handle his own dark lord problem.

Snape is a master occlumens. Do you consider that to make it improbable for his actions to have been influenced or coerced by Dumbledore (or some other outside force) and using that as a plot point?
I think we don't get enough about the discipline in canon to justify either position. And that a talented writer could twist it just enough to suit their purposes as long as they are internally consistent in the course of their own work.

I'd also like to know more about the dark mark and how it works. Is it a magical connection? A mental connection? Both?
How did you come up with the light up stuffed animal idea, was it plotted, or just a spur of the moment thing?
oh you mean Ashley? from Soulmate Bond?

I wanted a bonding moment for Harry and Sirius -- something that Harry could learn to do for his dad after his time in Azkaban and that bonding moment eventually led him to connecting with Astoria -- which if you've finished series 1 you know she's Harry's reincarnated sister.

So definitely planned.
What made you decide to have Zir be the god of magic/Hekate as Lady Magic?
Zir came first -- i created the character without a name then went in search of mythological names/figures to attach the characterization to.

Hekate is the Greek goddess of magic.
If ignoring those mentioned in canon, how do you decide a Patronus animal? Are there attributes you consider vital when choosing one?
I favor making the patronus match the animagus form -- it's my head canon that a patronus is basically an avatar of the animagus spirit which is a magical element within a magical person.
In regards to Draco... How culpable is he in recruiting fellow students? We did not see this in canon but he was influential in other matters. Does he need to atone? Was he fully resposible/in control of himself becoming a Death Eater?
I think he's a foolish brainwashed boy who has no choices if he wants to keep his parents alive. I don't think any of those children had an real choices.

When you own parent, who is supposed to be a source of safety and love, is basically throwing you at the feet of a monster -- what do you have? Where do you go?

Draco and the other DE children weren't taught to have choices.
If you could add in one class/pull in one professor (OC or otherwise) to the Hogwarts curriculum, what would it be?
I think kids should be taught Magical Theory and Ethics from day one.

I mean they've got 11 year olds carrying around the equivalent of a bomb.
You mentioned earlier that you could never redeem Umbridge (which, valid). Is there any character that you couldn't see yourself writing as the villan? If so, why?
I'm far too enamored with Hermione to write her as a true villain. Maybe a bit misguided or bossy but not as a genuine protagonist.

And of course Luna is a cinnamon roll.
Across all the works you've made and all the worlds you've created, is there one aspect that often causes you trouble? How do you overcome that?
I have a very difficult time writing action/fight scenes. To me they always read awkwardly like -- i'm giving step by step instructions.

As to overcoming it, I consider that part of my craft a lifelong work in progress. I never want to stop learning as a writer so that's fine. I'll get there one day.
Since you are a romance writer, do you ever see yourself writing a gen fic to explore certain ripples/world building aspects?
Well, at the heart of it -- The Absence of War is a gen fic - none of the romance elements in it are pivotal plot points and could be removed easily.

I really enjoyed the project and could see myself going there again.
Do you ever plan on continuing Legacy?(since it's basically another gen-fic)
I plotted 3 books then split the plot into 4 books.

So i have the ground work done but the lack of interest to currently write it. i have a plan for when it returns ????
Have you ever had a plot you loved but thought it was too crazy for you to write?
I mean i have a WIP in progress where Harry and Hermione run around trollilng the whole school with cartoons and Dr. Who soo... no?? LOL
Is there a character you’d consider doing a gender swap on?
Hermione.

I'd need to have a deep understanding of the character to know here to turn them for such a thing.
Have you ever considered doing a HP/Stargate crossover?
No. We talk about Big Secret tropes on the podcast and how they're hard to keep -- mixing two Big Secrets (Magic and the Stargate) strains credulity for me and I would quickly get wrapped around the axle trying to make it work.

I mean the ripple management would take up the first 100k of the fic.

That's how I get a million word fic and that's never going to happen. I like to write novels or novellas with a manageable word count that won't reduce me to tears in editing.
Is there a particular fandom you prefer writing? I know we're HP here, but interested in whatever your favourite to write might be, if you have one.
My fandom home will always be Stargate: Atlantis because I'm a huge sci-fi fan and i really connected with the show and characters.

HP is definitely my second fandom of choice as i favor writing fantastical elements far removed from reality because the world sucks a lot.

Getting lost in a completely different world and circumstances in my own head has always been a special kind of gift to myself.
Speaking of big secrets : thoughts on how to manage the SoS despite technology?
My head canon on the Statute of Secrecy -- enclaves/magical villages and schools are protected through a series of magical spells embedded in a lodestone of sorts in a hidden ley lake. And all warding charms are essentially also connected to ley lines all over the planet. These spells force anyone who doesn't know what magic is to ignore the existence of places on the map that should be visible via satellite but aren't. Even then it's sloppy. It's the biggest Author Hand wave of Destiny that JKR does in the series.

Y'all be careful not to step on my suspension of disbelief when you're picking up your own.

If I'd done the world building for HP, I would've put the magical world in a dimensional pocket accessible by highly defended magical portals.
To piggy-back off of that, in the dimensional pocket how would you handle muggleborns?
The same way they're handled now -- they'd get a letter, an introduction to the magical world, and if they want to go to school to learn magic -- they're taught how to find a portal that best fits their needs for travel.

For instance the gateway into Diagon Alley could actually be a portal into the pocket dimension.
If you could pull in any fictional character from other fandoms you write in raise Harry (besides Bilbo), who would you choose?
Like wholesale place the character fully into magical world with none of their own canon background?

Rodney McKay of course -- Harry would be a beast.
Do you ever find yourself afraid of the implications of your own work?
Yes. Because some people's children don't know how to act. I do hesitate when I write BDSM to include things that might make people do stupid shit.
What are your thoughts on McGonagall overall? She totally blew the children off when they were trying to tell her things in the first book.
I think she's 1 woman doing 3 full time jobs -- seriously. She's gotta be doing all of Dumbledore's work.

7th year was probably like a vacation for her -- even with the death eaters in her castle.
Do you think with where the books ended Harry could survive and thrive in Magical Britain or was it too late for him and the country?

This doesn't include the epilogue
All was well, right?

LOL.

No, I don't think so. Voldemort leaves an ugly world behind and maybe that was always the goal. Ruin it for everyone because he didn't get what he wanted as a child.

I sort of explored that in Duality.
I have a clarification question. Having just reread Darkly Loyal is Hermione still born in 1979 in that story? Because Draco states he's the first of them to return after Tom Riddle and it was my understanding that Hermione is the oldest.
Snafu on my part, surely. I honestly don't remember.
Do you ever see yourself having Harry's era or Marauders' era characters time-travelling to the FB era in any of your fics?
Eh, no. I've not even watched the FB movies.
How likely is it that some 80's teen movie plot where the adults in the school get turned into tots and they can't let anyone outside know. That they actually pull it off until they can get the adults back to normal?
Well. I needed that laugh. Just imagine wee Snape running around and demanding some dunderhead change his nappy.

I mean. You could write it as crack, right? But surely there are adult to adult convos that take place outside of the castle that would lean toward something being wrong.

Especially when Fudge was still kissing Dumbledore's ass.
What is your favorite magical creature to write?
I like the magical snakes and the correlation with parselmagic - it's compelling.
If you could add in some form of entertainment, because it seems to be severely lacking, what would it be?
Probably theater -- plays, opera -- it would fit well with the rest of the world building.
Would you rather fight 1000 Hippogrif sized nifflers or one niffler sized Hippogrif?
Niffler size hippogriff -- but i'm not much of a fighter.
Your magical snake and use of parselmagic is one of my favorite things in fanfic. You've done that really well and it's very intriguing.
I think the whole magical snake thing was sorely lacking in canon and she gave us this neat and interesting concept (parselmouths) then... nothing.

It was totally forgotten until he had to open the locket.
What happened to Buckbeek?
He flew off to Greece, found a flock of females with no stallion and is living his best life.
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